Thanks for taking the time to share your experience with me, Tlholohelo! I can definitely relate to the frustration and boredom you felt as I’ve encountered similar situations many times before. Your story is a perfect demonstration of the fact that redundant writing ‘pushes’ the reader away — often forever. Today more than ever it’s crucial to ‘hook’ the reader and keep her interested, especially given the limitless stream of new content from which we can choose what to read next. Cheers!